Why should you not read this novel? •The writing style is simple •The Grammar sucks •Limited Vocabulary Why should you read this novel? Even I as an author don't have an answer to this question, I know what's the negative point but the positive I don't know it yet, but I believe this story is more like a healing process for myself and maybe for many others who have been struggling with themselves and have felt like giving up any particular moment of life. This is a message for them, 'Dear you are worthy, you are brave and I am thankful that you decided to stay.'

Before I write my review, I would like to say something about the review that the author has made. Can I say I'm confused wheather I should laugh or applaud at your bravery? Your review is both hilarious and courageous at the same time! And now, here is my opinion:- Update stability — daily. So here goes the 5 stars. World background — I'll give here a 5 stars. The story has taken place in the modern time of China, and author has looked into the small details such as bowing heads, and using words like baba, ge, and so on that indicates the Chinese culture. Story development — The author has created some nice twists and plots here. I'm very curious about Ning's condition. One moment she is happy and at another moment, she is tormented by something, I wonder why? And why Feng used to dream about her suicide? Are they some kind of fated lovers or something? And that senior who bullies Ning, what kind of relation he shares with the MC... So many questions, but of course it'll be revealed only by the time. So it's a 5 stars for me. Character design— That's the best part of this story! And absolutely 5 stars here! Ling, the best friend of MC seems very fun loving cool personality. She is extremely protective of MC as well. But how she was guiltstruck in the initial chapters (before the time-travel) makes me wary of her. I hope this time Feng will be able to stop her from doing something bad. Feng, the male lead.— He is likable so far, and I have high expectations from him as he have to save not only the MC but also other side characters from drowning into the grief. Yuan has to be my favourite character in this book! Even I like him a lot, probably more than the main characters! He has a nice sense of humour, and he reads others mind like no one else. Ning, the main character. What can I say about her except I want to protect her so badly. This fragile girl carries so many layr of mysteries around her. Lastly the character I hate with a passion is Taotao guy. I hope he gets what he deserves. He is so evil. But I can't put all the blame on him, since it seems like his mother has made him the spoilt one that he is. Here every character is mysterious one way or another except Yuan. And Hua Ming, is he going to be back? What about Kai? has his journey ended already? Writing quality— The author writes in easy language that carries strong emotions. She knows how to make the readers understand the deepness of her words. The author is good at making the readers feel empathy for the characters. So 5 stars again. Now, the flip side here, No one is perfect grammatically, so there is no point in commenting on that. But I would say there are few typos here and there, it would be good if the author re-reads her work once in a while, that would help her to find those typos as it is not easy to spot all the mistakes at once. And sometimes the author ends up writing the gestures of the characters in the middle of the dialogue, for example, in chapter 20, there is a dialogue– ["You *looks at the boys* make me feel safe..."] Instead of writing the action of her eyes in the middle of dialogue, you could write it like ["You..." she looked at the boys and continued, "...guys make me feel safe."] This is just a suggestion though. you are writing two books and giving daily updates in both of the books is already great enough. So, no pressure, just write the way you feel is right. Well done on coming up with another great idea of the book. Some day I'll come back to read and reveal the mysteries of this book. For now, I am excusing myself. Happy writing! Also, if I said something extra, sorry not sorry 😉

Love the plot and the way the author made it intriguing. The writing style protrays how author wants to add every emotion to make it fun, sad and excited at the same time. Good work!! However, they are a few points that I kind of didn't like(purely personnel opinion). The length of the chapters, the sudden and at once throw of character info, the way the author differentiated two places or scenarios. I feel such a good plot and a fantastic writing skill shouldn't be hindered by some minute details. But frankly, love the plot and execution!

This book is actually pretty fine to read. There is a lot of dialogue, which I like in a story. I actually had some fun reading this, although I'm not too sure if this is a mystery or romance book.

It's an emotional one here. The author has a good grasp on how to use the words to portray those emotions. I went on a rollercoaster ride with this and I loved every bit of it. Great work!

I think this story does have a lot of potential. I see the characters are well thought out. But, I do believe that the readers would benefit more from the story if you were to refrain from doing "character info" panels in the chapters. Instead, try to integrate that into the story itself where we can read and understand the characters/world/plot as the story goes on. The info dumps in the chapters make the story kind of clunky and hard to read. I do want to get to know the characters and the world, but it's hard to figure out if one part is the story or the "info". This is my honest opinion. I definitely think you have something solid here and it can definitely be great. There is room for improvement. But very good effort so far!

This is the type of story that can make a reader emotional. While I'm reading the chapters, I got tears in my eyes. Ning's death and now Feng... I was heartbroken, good thing, both characters are back live. I'm curious why Ning killed herself and why her best friend and her husband seems to be guilty? This is a novel filled with mystery, it's addicting and interesting. Good job Author!

A good start. The writing quality at the start almost made me back out when I saw the script format, but reading ahead made me want to read more. The development of the plot and characters are moving along nicely, and I'll look forward to seeing what comes next

First of all, your writing style is amazing. I don't care what others think but i really enjoyed reading it. But author please don't add any third person between Ning and feng because they look so cute together. So now, i have only one thing to say

It's a good read, it was fun reading the novel. Keep up the good work author, out here waiting for more updates. l wish you all the best in the competition.