WRITING QUALITY: I have no problems whatsoever with the grammar and language; and how the story is structured, as I am reading this as smoothly as it goes. STORY DEV'T: Our story main characters were being swept within this old, special book in which they were situated in every fairy tale that's being "re-engineered" by giving it a lot of twists and turns; that they are tasked with a mission for them to accomplish in order to make an ending of the story where they are in and at that, they would be able to get to the next story as assigned by their "imaginary guardian" who also "plays" as the book's custodian. CHARACTER DESIGN: Our main characters and the other supporting characters as well within each story give LIFE to the story's set-up and characters. Every character in every story, engages in different roles which are unlike than the roles in the previous story where they ended. WORLD BACKGROUND: Every fairy tale has its own setting as it is shown by the main characters' encounters/dialogues and also by the supporting characters interactions with themselves. UPDATING STABILITY: Updates are always done and so far the story is getting greater.
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Thank you so much for the awesome review, this is some of the best feedback that I've ever gotten for one of my books, actually delving into all of that is amazing, thank you so much. ๐
I will joining again in the reader-reviewers recruitment event for WSA this coming September; I had joined last year under the FL category but I ended in the roster for the ML group novels. ๐ I'll be submitting one review each per category so that the admins can choose which among of my entries is acceptable. Last year, we were incomplete in our group (ML; we're two girls in the group with the boys) with only 9 people while in the FL group, they were complete with 10. They will recruit again 10 reviewers each per category. You can see in the WSA contest banner the schedule for this event which is included in it.
Deni_Chance:Thank you so much for the awesome review, this is some of the best feedback that I've ever gotten for one of my books, actually delving into all of that is amazing, thank you so much. ๐
*be* joining
aoi_hoshi_cath88:I will joining again in the reader-reviewers recruitment event for WSA this coming September; I had joined last year under the FL category but I ended in the roster for the ML group novels. ๐ I'll be submitting one review each per category so that the admins can choose which among of my entries is acceptable. Last year, we were incomplete in our group (ML; we're two girls in the group with the boys) with only 9 people while in the FL group, they were complete with 10. They will recruit again 10 reviewers each per category. You can see in the WSA contest banner the schedule for this event which is included in it.
I know that they recruit readers, but I didn't know the process. I hope you yet in the category that you want this time. ๐
aoi_hoshi_cath88:I will joining again in the reader-reviewers recruitment event for WSA this coming September; I had joined last year under the FL category but I ended in the roster for the ML group novels. ๐ I'll be submitting one review each per category so that the admins can choose which among of my entries is acceptable. Last year, we were incomplete in our group (ML; we're two girls in the group with the boys) with only 9 people while in the FL group, they were complete with 10. They will recruit again 10 reviewers each per category. You can see in the WSA contest banner the schedule for this event which is included in it.
I can do in both categories; it was also fun and was a fresh experience in reviewing those novels under the ML category. So which ever is chosen in my entries, anything will do for me. ๐
Deni_Chance:I know that they recruit readers, but I didn't know the process. I hope you yet in the category that you want this time. ๐
sounds good, good luck with the judging, and thank you for reading my book ๐
aoi_hoshi_cath88:I can do in both categories; it was also fun and was a fresh experience in reviewing those novels under the ML category. So which ever is chosen in my entries, anything will do for me. ๐
you're welcome; good luck also! ๐๐
Deni_Chance:sounds good, good luck with the judging, and thank you for reading my book ๐
thank you
aoi_hoshi_cath88:you're welcome; good luck also! ๐๐
