Interesting story, very descriptive and great world building, although characters are a little flat(not including the Mc). Grammer needs some work but either way great story so far.
Hello 👋 I am back after 4 years. I really needed your support on my latest novel "Murim Founder of 7 Martial Paths" Please add it to your colls and also read. I improved a lot over the years. This is just me hoping 🙏, I hope to have your understanding 😔