Hi, Author here... I'm writing an honest review here. This is my third work, and to be honest, I wrote this novel as just a fun and relaxing debauched vampire novel because of my liking for MVS. There's nothing much to expect from it for the plot maniacs. It's written in the first person pov, so it might be a little weird when reading it. furthermore, the plot progression is super sluggish (remember, I wrote it for fun.) And lastly, I can guarantee you good mid-tier grammar that won't make your brain steam.
Perverted_Fella
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LIKEAre you saying that my grammar is bad? 😂😂 Ah, there is nothing wrong with it. It was just written in the first person pov using the present tense. That's why it feels weird when reading it. The grammar is 100 percent correct. Guess you are used to reading novels that are written in the third person. For instance, the prologue was written in the third person pov.
Sin_Supreme:Use Grammarly for proper grammer and to prevent unnecessary capitalization. other than that, it’s good
This wasn't the original novel that I planned to write for WSA. But since I joined WSA with this novel, then I can only say that this is a fun-to-read vampire debauched novel for degens. It's a slice-of-life novel that revolves around the MC's daily life and delves into the weird culture of the vampires.
enO_rebmuN:Since you're participating for a WSA, how do you feel about your story now?
Perverted_Fella:This wasn't the original novel that I planned to write for WSA. But since I joined WSA with this novel, then I can only say that this is a fun-to-read vampire debauched novel for degens. It's a slice-of-life novel that revolves around the MC's daily life and delves into the weird culture of the vampires.image
I'm alive 🙂. Because of you, I'll update the novel tomorrow. The reason why I don't update frequently is that Webnovel is not giving me features. I haven't received a single feature this year, sad right?
Username_0:hey mam, have you kicked the bucket? if so, my 'bhavpurn sradhanjali' if not please tell me when are you planning to update this book.
Perverted_Fella:I'm alive 🙂. Because of you, I'll update the novel tomorrow. The reason why I don't update frequently is that Webnovel is not giving me features. I haven't received a single feature this year, sad right?
Haha, don't worry. Updates will start today. Btw, check out "Afterlife Online: My Wrath Against The Gods And Goddesses" on my alternative account.
Joethedeath:come back and write for us lol, dont poof
im glad, as i've spent alot on this story and i enjoy it, and ill check out that starting next week, cant start anything new this week sadly as all my current coins are tied to my ongoing reads ( though ill probably read the free chaps available )
Perverted_Fella:Haha, don't worry. Updates will start today. Btw, check out "Afterlife Online: My Wrath Against The Gods And Goddesses" on my alternative account.