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Unknownking
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HaReM, OP-ChEaT, SyStEm, 200 IQ 4d CheSs PlAyEr MC tHaT KnOws tHe NeXt HuNdReD MoVeS fRoM tHe EnEmY… If you crave these things, I'm sorry to disappoint you because my novel is not the dopamine-inducing stuff you were looking for. ;) And with that, let's start. Ayoooo, thank you for at least checking out, „Spatial Magus.“ To keep it short it’s a tragedy-filled story about the main character who in his search for what he once had, will lose himself and everything again. The story plays in a typical fantasy setting but with atypical levels of characters and world dynamics. Although the plot overall will be tragedy-filled, it will still be filled with moments of fun and troupe-busting meant for a mature audience. A few FAQs: 1.) System, Harem, OP/Edgelord MC? Nah. 2.) Themes? Conquest, war, revenge, betrayal, xenotransplantation, bloodline transplantation, transhumanism (a lot of human experimentations), drama, and tragedy are all themes one can expect from my novel. Maybe even fracticide, like in Cain and Abel, is not excluded. 2.) $mut? Not really planned. Depends on if my readers want it. 3.) Will there be a female lead/romance? I won’t be rushing it. so don’t expect romance in the next 100 chapters. 4.) Evil MC? well, he isn’t a hero in shining armor that’s for sure. 5.) Cliched plot? Nah. 6.) Young Master Troupes? Nah. 7.) Weak to strong progression? Yes 8.) Info-dumps? I try to minimize it, can always be skipped and will be in form of dialogues. 9.) Slow burn? Kinda. Tbh I cannot fill it with dopamine-inducing fights from the start. 10.) Daily schedule? 1 chapter/day + Bonus release (planned) 11.) Replies in memes and gifs? Always welcomed. I appreciate any kind of reply. So what is this novel about? Long version: There was once an MC known as Luz, who was living a peaceful and happy life with his siblings in their village till their death. Nah jk. As one might expect, the Author had other plans for them, and since suffering builds character (and definitely won't break characters), the village got destroyed. (just like my dreams of a writing career and their dream of becoming mages together.) Forced by circumstances, Luz used a spell that was way above his league. -A teleportation spell As one might expect, definitely not because, I, the author, enjoy tormenting his characters, the spell failed, and all of the siblings got yeeted to different places. Now it's up to them to find each other in a godforsaken world where magic rules supreme while also sharpening their blades for revenge (if they won't end up as slaves bc the world is cruel.) The story follows Luz on his adventure, while also giving glimpses of what is happening to the rest of his siblings. It was originally meant to be a multiple-lead novel. But after reconsideration, the rest of the siblings will be side MCs. Basically, MCs with no spotlight as they rot in the background till the author takes them out at some random chapter. If you still have any other questions feel free to ask me.^^

Spatial Magus

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Beelzeibub
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hope all that is true

GifflarGod
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Yuki_55
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Unknownking
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Yuki_55:
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Unknownking
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Well I hope so too😂. as of now, I finally started my first Real arc and tbh the first 40 chapters were kinda "integrating into a New society" slice of life arc for which i feel tbh a bit ashamed and should apologize. (I still plan on editing/or rewriting that part [arc 0], but I'm still unsure since I never really got any feedback.)

Beelzeibub:hope all that is true
Reckoning3000
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So is this a rewrite of lost souls?

Unknownking:Well I hope so too😂. as of now, I finally started my first Real arc and tbh the first 40 chapters were kinda "integrating into a New society" slice of life arc for which i feel tbh a bit ashamed and should apologize. (I still plan on editing/or rewriting that part [arc 0], but I'm still unsure since I never really got any feedback.)
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Unknownking
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it's complicated. it kinda is a rewrite, but it also isn't since this Version focusses more on Luz than on his siblings which wasn't the case in the old book, lost souls. there are still chapters regarding what is happening to the others, but unlike in lost souls, the siblings won't have dedicated arcs in this book. (I might write about their adventures in a separate book) nevertheless I hope you still enjoy reading this even though it's a slow burner (first arc starts rather late, like at chapter 35 or so)

Reckoning3000:So is this a rewrite of lost souls?
Reckoning3000
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So what would you prefer I read cause idk if I can read both rn

Unknownking:it's complicated. it kinda is a rewrite, but it also isn't since this Version focusses more on Luz than on his siblings which wasn't the case in the old book, lost souls. there are still chapters regarding what is happening to the others, but unlike in lost souls, the siblings won't have dedicated arcs in this book. (I might write about their adventures in a separate book) nevertheless I hope you still enjoy reading this even though it's a slow burner (first arc starts rather late, like at chapter 35 or so)
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Unknownking
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tbh it's up to you. xD however, I dropped lost soul bc I was too lazy to edit the old chapters (first try of ever writing a novel) + no readers. So reading spatial magus would make more sense. (tbh you can skip it even up to chapter 35 if the initial stuff is getting boring since the beginning is more of a "Luz's slice of live, integrating into a new home") xD Also if you got more question, feel free to message me on discord: Heide#0001 I will be happy to answer more in depth question and even how I Plan on moving forward/ arc ideas.

Reckoning3000:So what would you prefer I read cause idk if I can read both rn
Reckoning3000
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I am going to wait till there are more chapters stacked up.

Unknownking:tbh it's up to you. xD however, I dropped lost soul bc I was too lazy to edit the old chapters (first try of ever writing a novel) + no readers. So reading spatial magus would make more sense. (tbh you can skip it even up to chapter 35 if the initial stuff is getting boring since the beginning is more of a "Luz's slice of live, integrating into a new home") xD Also if you got more question, feel free to message me on discord: Heide#0001 I will be happy to answer more in depth question and even how I Plan on moving forward/ arc ideas.
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ColdWinterNight
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So there are no are but there is a FL....... Finally!!! I was searching for a fantasy novel without a harem for so long, you have no idea how many stupid harem novels are on WN far too many and the worst part is that they are also popular