Review Detail of diddingsdddd in (BL) Transmigration: Latent Intrinsic Love

You have a strong grasp on telling the story, your writing is clear and moves the story along. Judging from the first chapter alone i can tell your wary of info dumps so good job on that. -----------However, the plot, pacing, dialogue and believability, sorta takes a massive back seat. This is mainly due to clarity, your trying to mask the main character in mystery, even to the point of masking the other characters and clouding your story. The next problem you have is slipping back and forth between present tense and past tense. When it comes to this genre the number one killer is clarity, what's is happening ,why is happening, who's saying what? (Who is the female officer, and if they spoke for over an hour it is highly unlikely that she didn't introduce herself already, and highly unlikely we don't know any other the character's names). Last piece of advice , if you have to put something in a glossary for readers to understand, then you did a poor job presenting it in your story. I don't see info dumps, so I doubt you will have this problem, but then again, zero info within an unclear story can be equally as bad.