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Xero_5825
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2023-06-04 20:24

Read 12 chapter of the story, and i can say I really found something interesting. No hi-fi vocabulary, simplified and easy to understand writing style...which is kind of weird. As an author myself, you changed quite a lot of my view about writing...I really mean it. Negatives- Pacing of story, and first chapter is kinda not that catchy... compared to the chapters you wrote ahead. Story... I won't say much about it since I only read upto ch 12. But so far, so good. Keep up the work

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The_Novel_Man
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Thanks brother.

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