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Skull_emojiLv112yr
2022-07-05 01:06

Nice story Author. I don't know what to say, I know you're trying hard as an Author but you should put more effort to it. I hope you could improve more... Waiting for more creativity from you.

MY MUTANT SYSTEM

joshua_jt3
4.5
225 Chs

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Hydrogen_Starr
Hydrogen_StarrLv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr

DemonBoy01
DemonBoy01Lv10

I have to be honest, this novel is actually interesting the novel have a nice story plot and character development. I read many novels based on system genres but this novel is one of the interesting ones that captured my mind all the way from the synopsis to the chapters.

2yr
joshua_jt3
joshua_jt3Author

Hey guys, Author here. It looks really weird for the author to review his own novel but I'm going to do it anyway. Here are my reasons for rating my own novel 4.0 1. I once thought the writing quality was great, to me but now that I've gotten some honest reviews, I've realized its not that great. This novel is certainly the best I've ever written. Don't believe me, check Guardian of the Forest. However, my writing quality really has to improve, and I'm working on that. 2. The updating stability isn't as god as I hoped but this is the best that I can do for now. I'm a Grade 11 student so balancing between school, my novel and my art isn't easy so FOR NOW I'll stick to four chapters a week 3. I rated story development four stars because I think the story is very interesting. If your the type of reader who's not interested in reading for long but only wants to read interesting stuff, then this novel is one you should try. I warn you though, the first 25 chapters are laying down the foundation of the story so the remaining ones become more interesting as you go on. As I conclude, I want to state that this novel was mainly written for young teenagers and young adults but if you are not under that category, you are welcome to join the club, just keep an open mind and enjoy. Please do enjoy the novel and leave an honest review and vote, it helps a bunch.

2yr
Ashking
AshkingLv4

good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................

2yr
Grace_Ambers
Grace_AmbersLv1

I love everything about your book, it's amazing and thrilling. I can't wait for more chapters..................................................

2yr
Zoaper
ZoaperLv4

It seems similar to werewolf system, I didn't like it so I won't like this. dododldoldldldldlldkdkd dld,dldldl dldkdld ddkdkd dkdd d dkdk

2yr
Emma_subjects
Emma_subjectsLv1

The starting of the novel is very interesting and the more you read it, the more you are about what will happen next and the one thing which I must include that the writing quality is amazing...KEEP IT Up!

2yr
Kelvin_A
Kelvin_ALv14

This book is outstanding! I rarely read Sci-Fi but this hit the perfect spot.

2yr
Reborn_Killer
Reborn_KillerLv3

I might have not read the novel yet but seeing it is a system novel I can already see Compass carburetor (aka the System Slayer) coming to destroy the system and if the protagonist is a cliche I can also see Yoo Seodam (aka the Protagonist Slayer) coming too

2yr
Ebest
EbestLv3

🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝 the synopsis has got me hooked up to the book. the character design and story development is supercool. keep it up.cheers to the great work.

2yr
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