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L_Darkheart
L_DarkheartLv42yr
2022-05-03 01:24

i really liked the novel .It has potential . The story and the characters as of chapter eight are quite good. the characters are developed or should I say in a developing period . our mc is a wuss but i hope he develops some dominant traits in the potential future .The dark undertones in the novel are ok . I wish the author indulges in much more darker and mature themes while continuing the novel. Overall a niceeeeeeee read

Vampire Lord's Demonic Wives

BrewingFantasies
4.7
146 Chs

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BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesAuthor

There will be an underlying approach towards the dark themes in a satirical tone. Thank you for the note remarks.

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L_Darkheart
L_DarkheartLv4

your welcome

BrewingFantasies:There will be an underlying approach towards the dark themes in a satirical tone. Thank you for the note remarks.
2yr
Zerus
ZerusLv15

does Mc remain a whiny wimp the whole time or does it get better. because I can't stand the whiny wimp mc. i found chapter 4 really difficult will it get worse with the mc?

2yr
L_Darkheart
L_DarkheartLv4

don't know , there were no updates as the author was focused on his other novel . But now that he as started uploading new chapter I'll have to reread it to give my honest opinion 😅

Zerus:does Mc remain a whiny wimp the whole time or does it get better. because I can't stand the whiny wimp mc. i found chapter 4 really difficult will it get worse with the mc?
2yr
Zerus
ZerusLv15

thanks for the sincere answer

L_Darkheart:don't know , there were no updates as the author was focused on his other novel . But now that he as started uploading new chapter I'll have to reread it to give my honest opinion 😅
2yr
BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesAuthor

MC functions according to the situational demand. He gets upper hand with Devi in 27-28th chapter I think. But yep, it gets way too better gradually after that. Zoravec is a likeable and witty guy.

Zerus:does Mc remain a whiny wimp the whole time or does it get better. because I can't stand the whiny wimp mc. i found chapter 4 really difficult will it get worse with the mc?
2yr
1
BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesAuthor

Yes, sure please~

L_Darkheart:don't know , there were no updates as the author was focused on his other novel . But now that he as started uploading new chapter I'll have to reread it to give my honest opinion 😅
2yr
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Too few chapters for me to leave a review, but, I had to resort to doing it. The reason being, the author did a fantastic job in bringing out a myriad of emotions out of me which I didn't even know I had while reading this book xD. Can't wait for the new chapters!

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I get the feeling that English is not this person's first language. combine that with the fact that they don't really edit and you get really weird sentence structure that doesn't make sense. or that just flows terribly together. you can probably understand about 60 to 70% of it. but when it happens it's really jarring. really turns you off to keep reading. I shouldn't need to decode my books to read them.

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