webnovel
Sir_WendoS
Sir_WendoSLv42yr
2022-06-04 11:09

I like how the story is written, and have to say that the characters are quite... Interesting. What can I say... The story flows really well, and there's quite the elements that keep me entertained. Would recommend[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv4

Although it is kind of dramatic. I gotta say that her fate isn't that tragic. Compared to those in other novels that have orphans trained to be killing machine, she gets to be married with a rich young master so she doesn't have to worry about dying of hunger. But that being said, it might be my bias opinion for i am not a woman so I can't relate to their feelings. Nevertheless, i still enjoyed the read. Now for the review: Writing Quality: I am amazed. Although I don't read romance since I more of a fantasy and cultivation reader, I can say that that the writing is well done. There aren't any grammar mistakes that I could spot which would mistaken me to believe that english is the first language of the author (if it was, then he or she proved it). Story Development: As I have said before, kind of dramatic but it is romance fl so what can I expect? The flow of the plot was well done since there weren't any paragraphs that needed to rearranged. Character Design: The pros of a fl novel, the character design. Unlike most ml novels that have cardboard like characters, the characters in this novel felt as if they were real since the author conveyed the character's emotions pretty well. Updating Stability: It is still in the early phase of the novel so I can't say much. But since the author updated 4 chapters at the beginning, then I can at least expect that he or she is capable of updating 1 chapter per day. World Background: Not much said about this. The characters are in a castle but that is what is good about it. The author didn't info dump so it wasn't boring when I had read it. Overall: Excellent. I want to give a five star but since I believe that nothing is perfect, I will give 4.8 stars. Although this is a review swap, you can confirm my words by giving this novel a chance. Read at least the first 3 chapters before deciding to judge it. Reviewed By: ShadowKatake

Related Stories

The Devil's Cursed Witch

The tale of a man who brings death and a girl who denies it. ---- On the haunted mountain in the kingdom, they say there lived a witch. She was born a princess. But even before her birth, the priest declared her to be cursed and demanded her death. They poisoned the mother to kill the baby before she gave birth, but the baby was born out of the dead mother—a cursed child. Again and again, they tried to kill the baby but she miraculously survived every single attempt. Giving up, they abandoned her on the haunted mountain to die but she still survived on that barren land— A witch ‘Why won’t she die?’ Years later, the people finally had enough of the witch and decided to burn the mountain. But the Devil arrived to her rescue and took her with him from that burning place, because dying was not her destiny even then. Draven Amaris. The Black Dragon, who ruled over supernatural beings, the Devil who no one wished to cross a path with. He hated humans but this certain human girl would pull him towards her whenever she was in danger. ‘Is she really a human?’ He took the human with him and named this mysteriously tenacious girl “Ember”, a piece of glowing coal in a dying fire. A soul tainted with vengeance and the darkness of hell, would rise from the ashes and fulfil her revenge. ------ This is the second book from the series of The Devils and Witches. 1st book - Witch's daughter and the Devil's son. 3rd book- The Devil's Betrothed. All books are connected to each other but you can read them as stand-alone.

Mynovel20 · Fantasy
4.6
483 Chs

The Dragon King's Chosen Bride

What exactly does it mean to be his bride? *** Every year, in each of the seven villages that made up the great Kingdom of Ignas, a Choosing Ritual was conducted. During this Chosing Ritual, one of the ladies in the village would be chosen to be the dreaded Dragon King's Bride. No one knew exactly why the ritual was being performed every year or what happened to the brides that had been chosen in the past. Was he turning them into slaves? Feeding them to his dragon? Or was he... feeding on them? That couldn't be ruled out. After all, there were rumours that the king wasn't like them, that he wasn't human. Yet the question relentlessly troubled the people's heart. What was he using them for?! But they dared not question the King, afraid of what fate daring to go against him would be. Anyways, none of these was Belladonna's business. Although it was her village's turn to produce a bride this year, she was certain she wouldn't get chosen. Why? Well, because she had a plan and she was absolutely certain it wouldn't fail her... or would it? *** Note - This novel contains mature content. - Cover isn't mine. Full credit to the artist. Should they require that I take it down, I will. __ Want to give me more inspiration? Weekly Goals. 15 golden tickets - 1 bonus chapter. 200 power stones - 1 bonus chapter. ((Please help me meet them, thank you!)) Please check out my other books. 1. Stealing The Alphas' Soul (In a competition, please support). 2. Mated To The King Of Darkness 3. Dangerously Yours Till Eternity. Also, please check out "MOANSTERS // Reverse Harem" if you are interested in Reverse Harem stories. Thank you!

Phinix · Fantasy
4.6
505 Chs

Abyssal Chronicles

In the northern part of the world, a long-standing battle between various races and the demon race has finally reached its end. The Demon Lord, a figure with black hair, red eyes, rules from her obsidian palace, having repeatedly defeated the Goddess, the strongest being in the world. However, she refrains from killing her, knowing she will only be reborn to lead another attack. As the goddess kneels before her, badly injured and helpless, the sounds of explosions echo outside, signaling the imminent victory of the alliance. Despite her immense power, the demon lord acknowledges the demon's overall weakness compared to humans and the Alliance. The development of fighting energy and mana has allowed ordinary humans to fight demons, leading to the demon army's defeat. Aware of the Alliance's intent to enslave the abyssal demon, the Demon Lord decides to cast a forbidden spell that will cost her life. As the Alliance forces storm the palace, they hesitate upon sensing the spell's energy. The Demon Lord vows to resist and be reborn to save her people. Meanwhile, the goddess reflects on the demon lord's past treatment of her and acknowledges her respect and dedication to her people. As the demon lord prepares to cast the spell, the goddess asks if she can abandon her plan and live freely. However, demon lords are duty-bound to restore the demon race's glory and protect her people. Understanding the demon lord's resolve, the goddess readies her sword, intending to clash with the demo lord's forbidden spell. The resulting explosion creates a mushroom cloud, marking the end of the conflict and the start of a new era. The Demon Lord and the Goddess become historical figures, their stories occasionally told.

Hail_The_loli · Fantasy
4.7
1058 Chs