This is probably good for new readers, but for those who have already read few books, this feels like as someone pointed out in an earlier comment " a Disney story for kids". Conversations feel amaturish, ex: mc's grand mother gives some resources, mc says thank you and grand ma be like you are welcome. Typically there should be nothing wrong with the above if it was done properly, but this feels too formal, dialogues come across as they are strangers rather than two people who have been living together few years. Also as far i have read, novel feels too light toned, everything feels too simple and easy, this might be good thing for some, but once u read the likes of reverand insanity, lotm, fate destroying emperor, pos etc, this is hard to get into. Writing quality and grammar is good. Power system looks interesting. Verdict: probably a good book for new readers. Experienced ones would find it difficult to get into.
Elyon
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