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ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv43yr
2022-05-01 06:04

We all can agree that this novel is inspired from One Piece and that is what made this novel so interesting and fun to read. Expect that this would be the same as thinking if luffy have a system. So without a further ado, i will now start my review. Writing Quality: Superb... the author already have years worth of writing experience. If he has grammar mistakes, then it would mean that he didn't improve. So, you can expect to read a novel with little to no grammar mistakes. Story Development: Can already be guessed just from reading the synopsis. Think of it as luffy with a system but his parents were killed. But I gotta say, mc's past is same as Naruto. Character Design: Since author already have experience, he didn't make the mistake of making his characters like cardboards or one dimensional characters. Updating Stability: Author updates daily so expect that he can satiate your thirst for reading. World Background: 30% Land and 70% Water. What else did you expect? Overall: A must read. Author didn't info dump so it is an interesting and entertaining reading experience. But nothing is perfect so I wouldn't dare to give a five star review.

My Pirate System

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4.3
129 Chs

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draculemorningstar
draculemorningstarLv4

friendly warning to potential readers the mcs mom whòŕes herself out for money in chapter 15 something like that is not for me,hence I'll head out.

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DaoistIPLRHx
DaoistIPLRHxLv1

Story was good. really good with world devolopment. But MC'S adopted mother opted to who*e(gangb*nged) herself out, for a reason. Author just put this scene casually. D*ckhead author should have put warning in synopsis if he was gonna put this type of with discription,since lot of people are sensitive with this type of scene. should not be suprising if author put hardcore Netor*re casually with discription. I hope this comment stays,not get deleted.

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Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfLv14

the opening was so nice, and you could feel the chaos and unbalanced waves, the system begins a bit late but don't worry, you will be entertained enough on this voyage with pirates. [img=recommend]

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Tim_Wallace
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Just found this in the new novels a interesting read it has a lot of potential hope there will be more of it[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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bringer_of_Dusk
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milkshake_
milkshake_Lv1

I really like this story so far! Honestly, I wasn't a big fan of system books, but I find this book rather intriguing. Keep up the good work author~

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RafaelMitz
RafaelMitzLv3

It's a story with potential. The pirates theme is very interesting and not something very explored. It's nice to see someone telling a story like that. Despite this, I believe that the author needed to make readers know the protagonist more. He spent many chapters explaining and showing the prison break and when he barely starts to show the mc path, his choices and personality construction... Locked Chapter. Most of what I saw was tragedy after tragedy happening in Shiro's life. For me, it needs more for people to decide whether or not to continue reading the story. Not much to say based on the free chapters. It just has a lot of potential. The world, the monsters, gods, powers, history... All of this can be very good but you couldn't see it in the 34 free chapters. I wish the author success on this journey. I hope you do a good job. Peace!

2yr
xlntz
xlntzLv14

Cool concept! Though I've read novels where pirates are included in the story, they weren't heavily focused. Only an arc. But it seems that the author plans a grand novel here for Shiro. (btw, names are Eric, Kylle, Ria, Shawn then boom, Shiro was named to him. ) Not sure if it's due to the unidentified woman's backstory. Anyway, good story. easy to read. not wordy. I like third pov as well. i dont really read first pov. thanks for that. keep it up.

2yr
Munchy18
Munchy18Lv13

I see the potential. I will continue to vote daily and gift if it goes well. Looking for more explanation on the powers and other things.

2yr
oblackito
oblackitoLv2

First 17 chapters are mazing i really liked it but i don’t really know what they look like may be after a time skip? And i need like a 100 chapter rn please with a cherry on top😇

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