Review Detail of Demigod_of_All in My Demon Hunting System

Shameless author's review. Well, you can ask anything regarding the story here. Duh, I think it would be better if you ask in paragraph comments or chapter comments, but again, it's up to you. The story might feel extremely fast-paced in the beginning, so just bear with it. It will get interesting after Chapter 25 or so. Also, if you're not satisfied with the story after Chapter 25, please leave a review (even if it's only one star). However, you have to give me a proper reason regarding why you dislike the story. Anyways, I'm just an amateur writer who learns from his mistakes. So, feel free to tell me my flaws so that I can improve them and give you guys better content. Thanks.