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IkuSaari
IkuSaariLv132yr
2022-05-14 18:20

Sympathetic and lifelike characters. I liked the backdrop of normal...well, relatively normal stuff before the author started rolling the truly unusual events into the story. I think stories like this one need to establish that there could be a life with less weirdness, and then bring up the thing that changes everything. The pacing is good, the jokes are funny, and who doesn't relate to being distracted...my main problem was grammar but nobody's gonna care about that, right?

My Demon Hunting System

Demigod_of_All
4.7
192 Chs

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Demigod_of_All
Demigod_of_AllAuthor

Shameless author's review. Well, you can ask anything regarding the story here. Duh, I think it would be better if you ask in paragraph comments or chapter comments, but again, it's up to you. The story might feel extremely fast-paced in the beginning, so just bear with it. It will get interesting after Chapter 25 or so. Also, if you're not satisfied with the story after Chapter 25, please leave a review (even if it's only one star). However, you have to give me a proper reason regarding why you dislike the story. Anyways, I'm just an amateur writer who learns from his mistakes. So, feel free to tell me my flaws so that I can improve them and give you guys better content. Thanks.

2yr

Magecrafter
MagecrafterLv14

This book makes me happy and sad at the same time. Lol. The start is somewhat tragic, but I got comforted later on. Overall it's a nice story. The author did a good job, and I certainly hope this novel gets the recognition it deserves.

2yr
TFH
TFHLv6

SUP! As you requested will give this a read. If its as good as your date a live novel, it will be good. Now the important question... Is this a hârêm or not? So I can have some expectations

2yr
Daoistbips
DaoistbipsLv3

As the author said in the synopsis, the story was slow until chapter 25. However, this isn't slow but the author establishes the world background and characters. After chapter 25 the pace takes 180 turn and made me fall in love with the novel instantly. Ary is an interesting MC with believable goals and motivations. The other side characters also felt pretty fleshed out. Despite the title, this novel has something fresh and unique. Give this one a try and you won't be disappointed.

2yr
MoonlitBlackCat
MoonlitBlackCatLv3

Chapter 7 Do or die ---- Ary raised his gaze with his purple gaze filled with anger, Ary glared at Wolfra, asking, "Who gave you the right to take life when you don't have power to return it" Ary with the support of his blade, finally, stood up, and asked, "You'll pay..... you'll definitely pay for this!!!!" . ---- Unfortunately SS. MoonlitBlackcat couldn't stand the frozen mass of hypocrisy and raging waves of cringe, sinking into the warm deeps of other realistic novels never to be seen at this location again. ( This is SS. MBC's final log before sinking )

2yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The potential is great and has the webnovel quality. For me, the key strengths of this novel is its character interaction and plot. There were wholesome moments and the action is there. The issues there were the pacing of the action scenes. They felt stuttery for me. Also, the word choices sometimes will feel awkward to other readers. But still, all in all, the novel has the potential. The author's potential is still there and the best version is yet to come. Warmest regards, Mel_Aniv.

2yr
Ruler_of_Endless
Ruler_of_EndlessLv1

It's a nice book. The action part always intrigues me, as if I'm there seeing their fight. But when are you going to upload more chapters, author?

2yr
StevenWolfe
StevenWolfeLv1

Is this good? I haven't read it yet because the title looks like cliche and the description. Is it fit into the description if its is then that was not my cup tea

2yr
Elementary72
Elementary72Lv2

honestly was surprised in the start as I had wondered if I was reading the right book and the end of the first chapter has the perfect suspense to keep you reading honestly do recommend reading this book

2yr
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