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Review Detail of Lemon_4863 in Void Evolution System

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Lemon_4863
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I don't understand who is your novel's protagonist in later stages, in the whole situation in later arc's mc is nothing but a side character. All the spotlight is either given to his new friends or the wives, now I can understand that the focus on his wives, but every other new genius comes and takes the stage and mc becomes the side character, it's frustrating. Ignoring this I like the world building and it's unique power structure and the character design with there complex relationships which are rather realistic.

Void Evolution System

Crocs_is_Dead

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Lemon_4863
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and can't you write a proper "nsfw" chapter

Daoist0gLu26
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It’s realistic when the mc doesn’t have crippling self esteem issues that makes him push everyone away (like earlier in the novel when he was trying to cry and lock emotions away) Having wives be strong should be something you’re happy about, I dunno why you’re disappointed

Lemon_4863
Lemon_4863Lv3Lemon_4863

it's not that I am disappointed, rather I am happy that Fl's aren't just some vase. It's that in later stage the appearance of mc get decreasing