Review Detail of Bird_Of_Paradise in Void Evolution System
Review detail
Here is the authentic review from the beta reader of this novel! Writing Quality: Bruh, its the first book but as a native author, he has good grasp of writing. You can rarely find any mistake. The words are simple but well structured. Stability: Haha, *nervous chukcle* you are in for a good deal with the author. You can expect perfect stable updates hehe. Story development: Everything is well planned. Things that need more screentime are shown appropriately and if its useless filler scene, he makes sure to cut them. A solid 5/5. Character: MC is a likable and relatable character. All the Fls are well designed and put thought into. H.a.r.e.m is also well written showing perfect balance among the tension, drama and sweet moments. World: 5/5. Its a fantasy world but everything makes sense. Its well planned. i hope author makes a map of the worlds tho haha. Also Cover: Its one of the FL in the cover (reference art). It's nice and well, I love it. Conclusion: Dont skip over. Give it a try and I m sure it will hook you enough to continue reading XD.
Void Evolution System
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š¤£L.m.a.ošOnly if i was paid lolš¤§But this is authentic lolš¶If u don't like it, stay away...u don't have to say mean things and make fool outta yourself
VibingElder:this is a paid review, I got fooled by this review. this novel is basically a arifureta/solo leveling rip-off, the MC is kinda stupid, the characters are as bland as vegetables, and there is nothing new in the story as well. I wonder if someone will delete my comment, let see.
MargeBarge:Very authentic review, much real, much truth, much wow.
there is not a lot of authenticity when you take plots from other things. the amount of arifureta plot off bat and you call this authenticity.
Bird_Of_Paradise:š¤£L.m.a.ošOnly if i was paid lolš¤§But this is authentic lolš¶If u don't like it, stay away...u don't have to say mean things and make fool outta yourself
VibingElder:this is a paid review, I got fooled by this review. this novel is basically a arifureta/solo leveling rip-off, the MC is kinda stupid, the characters are as bland as vegetables, and there is nothing new in the story as well. I wonder if someone will delete my comment, let see.
VibingElder:this is a paid review, I got fooled by this review. this novel is basically a arifureta/solo leveling rip-off, the MC is kinda stupid, the characters are as bland as vegetables, and there is nothing new in the story as well. I wonder if someone will delete my comment, let see.
Objectively_Wrong:The cover is an FL? Did the cover change? Because that is definitely a vtuber.
why are you using arifureta as a comparison? their are a ton of solo leveling stories..lots of them infact. this one is unique. their is an outside force trying to rid the world of anything that isnt Nox. the MC will be going from world to world to basically save the universe. arifureta isnt like that at all. infact..he does everything he is doing with annoying companions..just to go home. that's it. his big plan..is going home. this is league's better then arifureta..its not even close.
JernSure:there is not a lot of authenticity when you take plots from other things. the amount of arifureta plot off bat and you call this authenticity.