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Tempest3600
Tempest3600Lv43yr
2022-05-07 17:32

Firstly, the story is interesting and we feel the author put a lot of efforts to create a complex and complete world. The characters are not yet well developped, BUT this is because there is not yet enough material to do so (only 16 chapters at the moment), and we can see there will be character developments soon in the future. The MC is OP but restricted with the use of his power, which will give a good development of the story. Secondly, the author has a good writing, english is not my first language but I can see there is not (or very little) gramatical/spelling/conjugation error. So I really recommend to read this story if this is the kind you like (of course everyone has their own tastes)

Seven Sins System

Nanakawaichan
4.7
411 Chs

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Nanakawaichan
NanakawaichanAuthor

Omg, thank you

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Another work. I believe this novel packs terrifying potential. I'll just be hoping for something, which actually is that: more chapters, please! Also, with respect to all other works as well as this one, thanks so much for making my day as always!

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dnax21
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It's been going well till now, the mc is ruthless by human standards but his attitude to murdering or cleaning bodies up is normal to the demon realm... i forgot the realm's name but anyway he has also shown to be considerate and who knows(excluding nana)he might try to understand mortal feelings and stuff. Can't say much about the stability since it has only started. For me, the writing is quality is great. PS: the best thing about this novel is that Barry(the alternative version of Larry from tis in the novel)is gonna have a girlfriend and no it's not a body pillow, he is actually gonna get a real girlfriend. Well jokes aside, bye.

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Keith_Pierce
Keith_PierceLv15

10/5 would recommend! In all seriousness though so far it is a great story. It has little to no grammatical errors and the author does give actual information on the skills the Mc currently has. At the time of writing there hasn't been much world building as of yet but it is building up a good foundation for it to be built upon. Nana-chan is a good writer and does her best to deliver quality stories to her readers and makes you feel as if you are actually watching over the characters. With that said you do feel your emotions being directed at the characters and not at the author herself.

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Nanakawaichan
NanakawaichanAuthor

I'm going to take 10th review~ Thank you for your support for my new book. This is my first time entering a writing competition and I have to say I'm a little nervous. This time, I took genre system harem genre (as always) and modern era. Slightly similar to my previous novel. This is also the first time I've written a tentacled MC *Cough* (Don't judge me). So anything can happen in this story. I hope you enjoy this book~

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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

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R_U_FOR_REAL
R_U_FOR_REALLv1

Beware_of_Demon_Lord 😈😈😈😈😈😎😍

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Fuck_her
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Awesome author🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Cenia_Candra
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My friend told me about this story. I thought it sounded interesting so I tried it. I got hooked instantly. Personally, I find the storytelling absolutely amazing. I believe that this is an amazing story. The MC is a devil. A little ruthless by human standards but he's not a coldblooded character who kills for no reason. Overall, I'm glad this is the first book I found in this place. Keep it up.

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