Review Detail of KhyaaL in Daily Experiences

So. I have read all 3 chapters and it's not the greatest novel I have read but it's not trash either. The daily experiences you shared are nice and all but how will you continue do you plan on sharing your experiences daily or of everyday? There is no proper end to such kind of novel. And don't get me wrong I am not saying it's bad it's good and unique. And as a newbie it's a good way to start your writing career but I think after getting the experience you should make a fiction novel too. You can keep this novel as a side work.. Anyways good luck...[img=recommend]