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IBCharon
IBCharonLv1210mth
2024-07-05 15:52

60 chapters in and I decided to write a review. First of all, great story!! Even though it is a common genre, I haven’t seen any copying from the other similar novels (for example, EM which is like the same story). So it has a unique storytelling. I was going to vote 5 stars but I habe a few criticisms regarding the mc. First of all, mc is created as a smart character; however, we see a lot of dumb decisions and he always forgets to appraise people and enemies. Don’t forget that he came from a world where this was a game and he was the best gamer. In a game, you would definitely check everyone’s strength before fighting. Also, he is not a pushover but he kind of is sometimes. An example is the engagement thingy with the princess. He should be more decisive. I would have rated 4.5 but one great thing is this is not a harem novel and I am grateful to the author that he didn’t make me drop this story, so I rate 4.8.

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_michael
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Thanks for your review. First off, regarding the Appraisal issue, the way I feel, even if you're used to doing something in a game, it will take some time to get used to it in reality as well, that's why he misses the Appraisals during the beginning chapters. Also, would you mind telling me what novel 'EM' is? I'd like to believe things get better as you carry on, so I hope you stick around.

IBCharon
IBCharonLv12

I will definitely stick around and read the whole story. Thank you for your answer!! EM is Ending Maker, it is a Japanese light novel with similar story. But “the game world is actually real and god created the game” thing explained at the end of the novel.

_michael:Thanks for your review. First off, regarding the Appraisal issue, the way I feel, even if you're used to doing something in a game, it will take some time to get used to it in reality as well, that's why he misses the Appraisals during the beginning chapters. Also, would you mind telling me what novel 'EM' is? I'd like to believe things get better as you carry on, so I hope you stick around.
_michael
_michaelAuthor

Oh I’ve read Ending Maker I also took a lot of inspiration from there. You may notice it in the ‘Disaster’ scenarios.

IBCharon:I will definitely stick around and read the whole story. Thank you for your answer!! EM is Ending Maker, it is a Japanese light novel with similar story. But “the game world is actually real and god created the game” thing explained at the end of the novel.
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