I kinda liked it, it was a fun read. I hope that the author continues the work and finish it deservingly.

A amazing book, the develop itself nicely and show a good background. The story is also very funny! I highly recommend to read it if you have the time!

It's a great read. The story is going good. The upload schedule is regular.

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Hey there, it’s your friendly neighborhood author. And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨ This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022. I hope y’all support me!🙂✨ Also, constructive criticisms are allowed🥲

19 chapters was all I could trudge through Just mediocre all around bunch of info dumps and system stuff that is never interesting world just feels like mediocre jrpg no interactions between characters basically, be it positive or negative characters are uninteresting be it mc or his fiancee, there isn't really any more currently (the gods I guess but they are like meh) handful of copy pasting a part of a previous chapter as if we can't scroll up, basically just increasing word count(just this behavior justifies dropping) is it possible that after another dozen+ chapter is will become much better, absolutely. actually chances are pretty high seeing as currently there nothing worth reading about this, so it can only get better from here. its just too boring wading through mediocrity. would not recommend but it can be read I guess, just don't expect much or anything at all for at least 20 chapters.

Superb description and good food for the imagination The prologue caught my attention and made me unable to tear my eyes away from this title

The story seems intriguing enough to make one continue reading. very good and promising. It's a good read! Keep up the good work! 🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

Overall it's a great start but MCs emotional development is not upto the standard. I hope this story has harem content. Try not to drop the story,because it has a nice plot.