The novel is great It's exactly the type I like I like the way you are develop the plot But you should try to The novel was enticing that I read the whole novel finish When I was reading it I didn't feel bored at all I feel like I should keep reading to find out what's gonna happen next The plot is running a little to faster tho You should try to make them more in order with each other I see a great potential in your work keep it up Author
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