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Dominus_Imperius
Dominus_ImperiusLv52yr
2022-06-30 02:32

while the naruto part of the story was wonderful it changed to (hp)+multiverse without much of a "why". if you like naruto, that's gonna be a wild ride but be prepared to be randomly introduced to a scenario change

Start of an Uzumaki Clan - Multiverse

Crazy_Penguin
4.5
97 Chs

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Crazy_Penguin
Crazy_PenguinAuthor

Thank you for reading... I hope you give me a chance to make it smoother next time.

2yr
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Goose_no_1
Goose_no_1Lv10

So he can get magic

2yr
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Crazy_Penguin
Crazy_PenguinAuthor

Yo Crazy Penguin here, since this is my fanfic i have the power to write a 5 star review. Please remember this is my first book please go easy on me. This review is basically to answer some of your question; if you have any.

2yr

TFH
TFHLv6

Started off good... mc plans ahead and is not shy to express his desires... but... mc went 100% evil... i got feed up with mc and the author when out of nowhere he decided to go to uzu no kuni and kill everything in his path. Civilians, children, women, bandits, their prisiones, innocents.... he even asked a father and daughter pair for directions, his reward? Cut the head of the father cause he knew now that he was going to uzu no kuni but left the dauggher alive cause he didnt bothered to R her and then laught about it.

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv12

TFH's review is pretty much perfect it, started off good, i'm just putting my two cents in. The update stability is great and writing is readable, not really engaging, but readable nonetheless. the main character is a twisted man child that has no grasp on the concept of morality when the author wills it so. he Brainwashes people to be 'loyal' and then the author excuses the behaviour as even 'good' people are 'bad' in Naruto... The author himself admitted to only knowing stuff about Naruto until up to Sasuke leaving the village AKA nothing, and i'll tell you now, it really shows when you read it. He's made enemy adults pedophiles as justification for his psychotic MC to kill them. Not much to say for character development since the brainwashing ruined that for me. Can't develop a character when they're now a robot instilled with the concept of 'loyalty' with a distinguishable trait. I.E Hinata has white eyes... I mean she literally accepts a harem because of the brainwashing BS because we all know thats never happening with the real Hinata, this here highlighting the lack of knowledge from the original source.

2yr
nguiba_ouattara
nguiba_ouattaraLv3

I love this book even though some may say that it is not worth it and other stuff, please consider reading this if you are a naruto fan and have caught up with everything from naruto, to naruto shippuden, to boruto. You will have a fun time reading this

2yr
Devil023
Devil023Lv4

This is my evaluation this PSYCHO fanfic. MC is a Psychopath who kill everyone including innocent, kids, women and old, he doesnt care if the girl will get ra**ed after killing his innocent father when he answered the direction. Even after gettin ANTI NTR wish, He doesnt trust his women and implant bombing chakra which will kill them if they betray and control kushina loyalty . All he needs is subordinates.

2yr
_Maestro_
_Maestro_Lv3

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2yr
JESSAZEAL
JESSAZEALLv4

don't read!! the author is an idiot, well considering he was an Indian... he always made that the mc was not dense like other mc, he was indeed not dense but an idiot without a clear head. his mind always changes and does not even have a clear goal, he wanted to portray an arrogant character like how Chinese do but instead make the mc idiot, bro no one in the right mind would not like an inlove girl( Sakura ) even in the mc was dark.. bro you said he was not a psychopath. well, considering that you wanted the readers to feel frustrated bro you're wrong, you look like an idiot. the author always asks for a harem member poll but this idiot decided on the harem itself .. hahaha man what's the use of interacting with the readers and asking their opinions if you can't even let their suggestions happen? besides, this is what every fanfic writer messed up in their story, fanfic was a genre to follow and fulfill the reader's illusions or delusions, if you want to have a lot of readers, you should at least if not all fulfill their dreams.

2yr
DaoistGsSe3J
DaoistGsSe3JLv1

Полная херня, mc думает членом, к тому-же стоит тег злодей , но на самом деле он просто мудак...........................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
SAINT_of_ORIGIN
SAINT_of_ORIGINLv14

nice after reading that anti hero and cringey lines like he will protect his 'loved ones' I was gonna drop it but I changed my mind after reading the reviews. idk if this is the author's trick to invite villain readers but good job anyway

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