Review Detail of Raphis in The God of Wealth!

The storyline is quite simple and easy to understand. The characters' traits and attitudes are enjoyable; I like them. The writing quality is good. However, there are a couple of things to note. Firstly, you don't use quotation marks; you should use them to help readers distinguish between narrative and dialogue. Secondly, the depiction of situations, characters, and locations is still a bit faint and lacking. Overall, it's good.