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Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv22yr
2023-03-08 23:13

With the read he actually feels like madara ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Danmachi- Madara in the Dungeon

JJstired
4.4
25 Chs

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Thorn_Vale
Thorn_ValeLv2

Firs chapter and he doesn't feel like madara

2yr
Other Reviews
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

The author does not know who the madara is. Madara learns about the currency, learns what can be bought with money. Madara is not stupid. Madara does not play the hero, does not do unnecessary favors. The author ruined the novel.

2yr

JJstired
JJstiredAuthor

so, uh, let's see if I can finish this bad boy huh?

2yr
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

Nice novel and good idea, but full of grammatical errors and unbelievable events and realism. Even if he is Madara, that's not an excuse for him being stronger and faster than his body should allow for his stats. Even with chakra being a factor; chakra that he never trained in his new body too. There are also a lot of small inconsistent plot holes about how the monsters and people behave... but those are more of a nitpick. Overall, this is a madara wish fulfillment; if you expect a fun op madara novel then this is fine, but if you want a more realistic/serious approach, it's not. The grammar errors are a lot, but they don't disturb the novel too much. The first 5-6 chapters are a good indication for what the novel is like, read those and decide for yourself if you like it.

2yr
AuthoriTet
AuthoriTetLv4

grammar could do some work, use grammarly to fix the typos and stuff, but overall the story is great.

2yr
The_8th_king
The_8th_kingLv14

His personality is nothing like madara and not to mention the many grammatical mistakes but what really got to me is how you made madara's pride and unbendable will and tyrant like persona non existent plus you made him a little submissive follower

10mth
AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Scary amount of spelling mistakes but besides that the author did incredibly good. If he used grammarly like a review suggests or had a english friend look over it id give it about 4.8 out of 5

2yr
Shady_Emad_
Shady_Emad_Lv14

Now, this is good fanfic and I love how Madra is developing in it. especially that I love danmachi world. In the end, I will give it 4,8. just because of the Grammer.

2yr
Maya_Matengele
Maya_MatengeleLv11

My guy, this here fic is a hidden gem waiting to be polished. The only visible fault here is the lackluster grammar. I offer to edit for you free of charge if you're interested. Otherwise keep up the good work😎

2yr
luckky25
luckky25Lv4

I love you please more chapters I have been waiting for a naruto/danmachi crossover like this and I absolutely love Madara excellent execution 10/10

2yr
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