The story is great. Writing Quality is also pretty good. There is great character development I also liked the brotherhood part but now that they are dead or to be more precise the fact that Arakan's closest friends pushing him to the darkside kinda disappoints me. In your previous novel too you made the Mc have a dark phase and ended it at that. But now the fact that Izachin and kakuchan were actively trying to push him to dark side makes this much worse. I just hope he grows out of this phase. Make no mistake I hate one dimensional snow white personalitied MC's like that smartphone isekai guy but I also hate Edge lords like Kirito. However the fact that his brothers betrayed him makes it super sad. Well at the end of the day these were just my thoughts and you can do what you want in this novel
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Here is the thing Izana and Kakuchu did not betray Arakan as Izana stated before he strongly believed that Arakan was just made to be the one who will rule all. They used their deaths to push Arakan into motion.
