Let's get won't thing out of the way. The fanfic is great and Fugaku is a very underrated character. The wishes were also unique in the Naruto setting. But something off-putting is the dialogue. It's so formal even between friends. It's like I'm reading one of those Chinese novels. If you can fix that it'll be great
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Actually, I am from Asia more accurately from the Middle East but it is Asia. Anyway, the way I speak to my parents or to others is, well, like that. We are culturally not very liberal and as such we tend to also speak that way.
But I am working on changing that. 🤙🏽
I am also from Asia and we speak less formally. You are mistaking politeness for a formal tone. 😅
Ikaru5:Actually, I am from Asia more accurately from the Middle East but it is Asia. Anyway, the way I speak to my parents or to others is, well, like that. We are culturally not very liberal and as such we tend to also speak that way.
Asians are polite. We don't always speak formally but in a polite manner. I think you got both a bit confused there.
Ikaru5:Actually, I am from Asia more accurately from the Middle East but it is Asia. Anyway, the way I speak to my parents or to others is, well, like that. We are culturally not very liberal and as such we tend to also speak that way.
