Review Until Chapter 40: Love the story. The plot was good and the characters are okay too.š¤š¤š„°š„° FL has Nature Power with Space System (Like Lin Yuelan/Xinlanās Little Green and Space). The only thing missing is the spirit water/spring. The FLās space is missing this. In this book, her power was called WOOD but calling it NATUREās Power is more apt since it connects to all living things plus WATER. Her space is a system that detects plants etc. this power just came about and no other explanation was given so far. Iām not sure if FL came from modern era, apocalypse era etc. And it was not mentioned how she died in her previous life. ML, Shao Yunduan, is a Cultivated Talent Scholar at the start of the story. No age mentioned as well as any power. Heās very shy and innocent in relationshipsš. FL loves to tease him. Pet peeves in this story: Sister-in-law and Use of Ms. in the story. Translator could you please change and edit these. š¤š¤š¤ Sister-in-law is also being used by the juniors to call their aunts-in-law. Why not just call them Aunt to make it simple?š¤š¤š¤ The mother-in-law and husband call their own spouses and in-laws with Ms. Why not call them by their name or wife or husband etc. it is soooo alienating and cold to hear. Especially if one reads it with the Eldest Shao Branch Family. So awkward to read. Just use Madam for the mother-in-law and use names for the juniors.š¤Øš¤Øš¤Ø Also, the aunts would call Qiao Xuan as Niece daughter-in-law when she happens to be the wife of their nephew. She should be called as nephewās daughter-in-law right?!š¤Øš¤Øš¤Ø Translator please edit it. So awkward to read such a good story. These words ruined the flow of this story in a way.ššš Please release this nextā¦ we need the next chaptersš„°š„°š„° [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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