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2022-07-23 11:53

Well the quality of your writing skill need to be improve more BUT the concept idea of this ff are good for a wish fulfilment story. Don't be discouraged just because some dislike and critique your story. Everyone starts from somewhere and I think everybody deserves to share the stories we tell, no matter what skill level they are at.

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Just hope the good quality of writing and may MC become a character with TRUE-NEUTRAL×NEUTRAL-GOOD×Anti-Hero Persona. One of the best MARVEL fanfic i have read. I hope it is a Mix with Comic(Earth 616)×MCU. *MC is the superior version of DOOMSDAY. *As it is shown the MC powers to copy and adapt everything in body,mind hope to see his soul also gets strong as we know many can manipulate it in Marvel. As MC is able to copy and adapt the DNA/powers/abilities/experience, make MC also able to copy/adapt of objects too like copying the Infinity-Stones(Esp- Ego the 7th stone as it has the knowledge of Infinity cosmic entity), Metals etc., but has to master them. *Make MC go back in time copy to learn all origin of ancient magic/rune arts, martial arts, etc., also copy the books of magic where Dr.Strange learned by going back in time in what-if and the copies of it back in kamar-taj as it was it's origin as a thanks to ancient one. Especially make him able to copy the ability of Douglas Ramsey(Cypher), Sentry and Multiple-Man etc., As MC has already learn magic, make him also learn all Combat Arts with chi manipulation - and creation a Art like cultivation including Tech-Magic which can be learned by any being. *Save the planet by preserving the nature, making it's energy richer like Earth-838(Multiverse of madness) but with Tech-Magic/Technomancy and Runes making the planet-resources and planet regenerate infinitly. *As we see many WESTERN Characters in the fic hope to see/read the ASIAN Characters too like Shang-Chi, Amadeus-Cho, Sliver-Samurai, Sunfire, Suzi-Endo, Mandarin and many more. Also Hope to Mutants(Turn them into Meta-Humans) and F4, ETC. Just an suggestion as this FANFICTION is intresting. HOPE TO SEE THE NEW RELEASE SOON...

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