So to start with grammar and writing quality make it very easy to read. It is a well structured story that while not just dumping info on you is slowly providing information about the world and how to got to be the way it is. Overall it is very interesting so far, and whipe there are not many chapters I do look foward to more. The characters are well done and for the most part seem well flushed out, but as mentioned there are only a few chapters so we will have to see if that continues. Overall it is definitely a story to look foward to. I cant wait for more updates keep up the great work!

Heart-touching character backgrounds? Check. Unbelievably sweet and cute familial bondings? Check. Extremely interesting lore and mechanisms? Check. Look no further, for you have landed on the best thing since sliced bread. Eldric's change in his state and the way his character is grown and explored is a joy to read through. Unlike many similar stories, we see a lot of new and logical ways the reincarnation trope is explored giving a unique spice to a very familiar trope which I absolutely loved. Alongside the very charming main character, the wide and peculiar range of side characters and their personalities keep you engrossed with each line of the story and make you more and more invested in it. Just 15 chapters in and I would already kill for some characters in here. Whether you are looking for a quick read or a story to remember for a while to come, I am sure this one will fit just your needs and more. I am totally hooked on it and would recommend it to anyone in a heartbeat. P.S: Join the Epine cult, now. It's a threat.

Personally, I could feel the emotion the author was attempting to extract from the various characters. I also think that the first death scene was written quite well since the reader has no prior knowledge of the characters and I actually felt some emotion from the scene. I think the writing quality and readability are done pretty well. I see great potential with this novel. Give it a check!

The story is interesting with great pacing so far. There's a limited number of chapters so its hard to get a good judgement, but if this continues it will be phenomenal. The characters are all distinct and the details adding to the world are wonderful, great work author!

Down below is my review of the novel: Writing: 4.2/5 You master grammar, but the punctuation problems and bland narration at first bring down your score(though 4.5 is the most I'd ever give to something that's not professional) Updating Stability: 5/5 Story Development: 4.4/5 You did a lot of things right here. Character Development: 4.5/5 As good as I can give to a web novel. You did great working with Eldric, I'd have to read more to see how the other characters are fleshed out fully, so 4.5 for now. World Background: 4/5 Your world is functional, though I can see behind the background the promise of something great. Overall: 4.5/5

This has the potential to be one of the best novels that I've read on webnovel, based off the beginning. The author does a great job of portraying the character's emotions, and does aa great job of drawing the reader into the story. This book, at least as of chapter 16, is probably the best start of a reincarnation novel that I've read. Very much looking forward to more chapters, please keep writing consistently!

i read the first 2 chapters and i must tell u that thus author knkw how to descibe pain and finql moments for sure . the poor kid eric suffered till the end because of his sickness and was forced to die leaving his beloved family . bu y somehow he got a new chance ,the writing stylr is simple and the author did a great job w ith the pot

Do you intend to end this novel?. I saw that you didn't release chapters for a while and you've been writing a fanfic with many more views than this novel, so as much as I've enjoyed the story, I have my concerns. [img=faceslap]

writing quality great updates suck story development a bit slow but because we go into beautiful world building(my advice add to library and wait for chaps to build up) characters are ssooo gd world building is the star honestly