Review Detail of OnlyMesha in Head-Patting in Marvel

Great story man, suitable when you're bored and want to pass some times i really recommend to read this books My criticism is well because the marvel main plot is just started make sure when the mc have a big role in the main plot you can make some marvel chara in the story dont forget how important marvel original character like tony, cap, or even gwen, etc make sure they got some parts in your story try to add some more good marvel's comic plot that suitable for the mc future plot Don't forget to not just follow the marvel plot, bend it a bit and probably make it permanent in the story And i think you need to make a few chapter/ arc about his family/close one For example gwen really got a spider power and their relationship is at strain Or his father/butler povor viewpoint about him go creative man It's just an advice don't feel obligated to do it, my point is try to make the story more exciting with some creative way (Just make sure you don't feel obligated with the reader adivice, consider whether the advice is good or bad for your story future plot/writing syle)