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Akayukihime
AkayukihimeLv12yr
2022-08-15 18:08

I like the multiple pov of the fanfic which is quite unique as said by the author in the pinned comment that the story is going to be Multiple POV and lead of the same person but after reading quite a lot it feels like the clones are not the same person anymore with their different personalities and all. I read many comments about people having problem same as mine that they want to know if the clones will continue with their different personalities or they gonna be one lead again or not. Till now author have not replied to any of the comment which tells me that the clones will be different person at one point in the story which is quite a turn off for me. Having clones like naruto or a same mind clone is not bad but clones with different personalities and someday they might become different individual person is quite detrimental for the story , Unless the author cough out what he is planning , I have to go for 3 star as I dnt like reading Different MCs POV.

Head-Patting in Marvel

Alittlepiggy33
4.5
238 Chs

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Alittlepiggy33
Alittlepiggy33Author

Just go to my discord if you want to know what I'm planning.

2yr
Akayukihime
AkayukihimeLv1

I would love to join your discord but the link is expired.

Alittlepiggy33:Just go to my discord if you want to know what I'm planning.
2yr
Avengtank
AvengtankLv5

yea i would also like your discord , but the link is not working for me too idk why

Alittlepiggy33:Just go to my discord if you want to know what I'm planning.
2yr
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Alittlepiggy33
Alittlepiggy33Author

Reveal spoiler

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mickro
mickroLv14

The Story has a very interesting take on the merchant/shop type systems and I love how the author ties all the diffrent POV's together. He adds in Omake type chapters you want to skip but can't as it ties together the actions of his MC with future direction of the story. It is all very well written and keeps you drawn into the progress of the story no instant power ups, and the MC is very human in his personality and there is a lot of character building put into the story better fleshing out he man he used to be.

2yr
Nerosin
NerosinLv15

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2yr
berserkbarath008
berserkbarath008Lv5

it's about a man transmigration into a boy in mcu with a system with trade facility. the starting goes good and author did a good job then it comes the clone him and split his personality I was like okay. then the clone arc which is really good. then it becomes a typical fanfiction. personally after getting quest I become to lose intrest. and also with the mc love is rushed. where in mc clone case I think that idea is really good worth for its own without system and other things. then it comes the magic which made he drop reading it. it is really hard to have a character which on the same plane as mcu character. if the author tones the mc system and props he get and become a superhuman but not op it would be intresting. The characters character not so attachable. my advice to author is put yourself into the situation and write more practical with exaggeration. just because you got a system and in mcu nothing becomes easy. overall it's okay for me

2yr
ToastedBoat
ToastedBoatLv3

Too much focus on the clones and apparently the 2 clones are not clones anymore because the can do whatever they want like the fighr with the doctor clone Too much unnecessary drama between the clones Tldr the clones don't obey the mc and they do what they want

2yr
Shadow_Monarch28
Shadow_Monarch28Lv4

A Good story but the clone thing that have almost gonna became separate independent individual. For me the story became bad because of it. its my opinion so no offense sorry

2yr
as_ss
as_ssLv1

Writing quality would be 0 starts if giving 0 stars was possible. Everything else is 3 stars. .

2yr
8ightbit
8ightbitLv4

The story started off good and it was entertaining.. but then stopped being so, because of the constant unnecessary drama and endless fighting scenes.. it got boring quick...

1yr
Demikus
DemikusLv5

The story beginning is fine, but later after our hero got himself a clone and not one, story goes downhill.

2yr
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