Review Detail of Serialeater in The Football Dynasty

Hi, this is Serialeater, the author of this story. Now, even though my name may not inspire you to read this, do give it a try and I will try my hardest to make it worth your time. It is my first time writing, so please give me suggestions even if it's already good enough *wink*. And for the last time, it's not called soccer, it's called football. Now go on, read it. It's time for me to eat, ahem, I mean write.