I am not sure how to start with this. My advice is that, try to be more detailed in explaining the whole scenario because for me as a reader, it seems lacking of some elements. It might be short but this novel has a potential. You just need to dive into on how you can explore more of what your story is into. Just keep writing and practicing. ^_^
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