Review Detail of I_Am_YourDad in Reincarnation Paradise (TL)

Sooooyaaaaa:500 something, but the translation went downhill there, i think it's not nyawdao2-san who translated from that point onwards.

I_Am_YourDad:ok, thnx

Sooooyaaaaa:You can search the edited version, just saw that earlier. it's grammar improve significantly, tho there's still errors but it's manageable