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Review Detail of M7TH1C in TVD/The Originals: The Original Hybrid

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M7TH1C
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I'm on C5 rn and It's good but there's a few things that aren't that good. First of all, the story has multiple time skips and It just gives an explanation of events. Say them going to France, Klaus making a supernatural org and then him getting with Aurora. This was just summarized In a way (Idk how to explain It). The author could've made It so many more chapters If he added loads of stuff like Aurora bonding and how Klaus made the org but nope, just straight up told us he made the org In a few years and that Klaus realized Aurora wasn't crazy. Other than that the grammar Is fine for the most part (I currently cannot remember as I have bad memory) and I don't really mind It. So yeah, It would be 3 stars If not for the fact It was a TVD fic which Is a rarity on this s1t3 so good look with your book author and I hope you do well.

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TVD/The Originals: The Original Hybrid

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I understand what you mean. This is my first time writing and i can already see mistakes I've made but i think I've = definitely improved as its gone on.