I read until the most recent chapter The Smell. Writing Quality is good. I can't remember any error if thy were any then they weren't important because I don't remember them. The story develops well there are secrets. fore shadowing, misunderstanding (I don't care to much for those), and hidden identities. Character development is great my favorites are Feifei and Yuan of course and my most dislikable characters are that Rong guy and Yuan first sister. The likeable characters are really likeable and the dislikeable characters are really dislikeable. I still don't know about the update stability I read it all in 2 days. The world seems like it will develop well. I'm not excited about these new creatures being introduce. I should stop before I give out spoilers. The book is good give it a shot. Also smut... it's great you won't regret reading it.
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LIKEbabyPig:Thank you! Thank you! Your comments really energized me to work harder in my portrayals. I really appreciate it! If you don't mind me asking, does the gore on some of my chapters a turn off? I would really like to know if I need to tone it down a little or spice it up a notch?