If you're into plots that have a lot of misunderstandings, then this story is for you. I'm not into this type of genre, but I've invested a lot of time and money into this novel so I'll finish it until the end. But if I had known beforehand that it was full of so much miscommunication then I would have skipped out on this story. I think what also needs a lot of work is the translation of the pronouns. It jumps around a lot from he to she or vice versa and I have to reread the sentences to understand what the paragraph is trying to say. The character's names or at least the female lead's name is often alternated between her English name and Chinese name as well. I caught on to it quickly so it got less confusing, but the consistency is just not there. Hmm... although this is not the best story I've read so far, I'm still hoping for a positive outcome.
Essence of Troll
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