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2022-05-28 12:00

So far so good. I quite like the main leads, and it's not too melodramatic (yet). I would've liked a bit more emotional fallout on the part of the FL from cancelling the wedding/breaking to with her boyfriend - she seems to get over it quickly and easily. Even though the dude's a terrible person, that doesn't mean that you'd be able to get over him/go back to normal so quickly, especially if you'd liked him for 3 years (as the FL had). The FL seems to have a mystery past (she said she "remembered" the ML's sister would wake up in 3-4 days after she treated her, which is an odd turn of phrase). All in all, would like to read more.

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