I'm a 'proofreader' and have already read up to chapter 21, so I am capable of forming a decent review right now. First of all, this story is a rewrite of the author's other Fairy Tail story, and while those chapters have been deleted, I can confidently say that the rewrite is a lot better. The writing style is very good since the author has an editor, and if I were to notice a mistake, I would also mention it (along with a few others), which in my experience has only happened once. The author has some experience with his other books. The One Piece story was pretty popular and well-written too. The planning done by the author and the editor is very well done since they always talk in the chats and voice channels to discuss the planning of the story, and since this story is AU with a lot of changes, it has to be done very well so it feels natural, which it does. H*ll, the story is more realistic than the original in more than just the power of friendship being removed, but I can't say much of that since that would be a slight spoiler. The updating frequency should also be good since there are a few chapters stocked up, and their writing pace isn't slow, though the dropped (perhaps to be continued) stories do worry me even if they said they wouldn't drop. The world-building is very amazing since the AU elements are implemented very well. Fairy Tail's author left a lot of things unexplored, but in this story, a lot of those unexplored things will be shown. The MC is pretty nice. He looks like Shanks and has crush magic since he is the son of Gildarts (you can't tell me this is a spoiler. You gotta be a buffoon to not realize it). I don't think there is anything really bad about the story, so do read it

shamless review but I hoped you guys liked the story. I know I dropped all my previous stories but I do plan to finish this story, currently, we have 23 chapters stockpiled, about 51k words, and tons of stuff planned. So yeah hope people like this rewrite

So is it dropped?😭😭 Could you explain why you deleted all the chapters and book cover

I just wanted to say that I've been really impressed with the writing quality so far. I haven't noticed any mistakes, which is great. It seems like this story has a ton of potential, and I'm really excited to see where the author takes it.

It has a lot of promise. Always great to see a fairytale fic and this one has a great premise. We haven’t seen much so far but the character design, magic and background seem promising. Author’s works have continuously improved as he’s been writing in previous books, so this seems good. Hope this lives up to it’s potential and that we get a lot of chapters and frequent updates.

The story is a massive improvement compared to the author's last stories. The writing quality has been quite good so far as there are close to no mistakes. It's too early to tell how the story development and character design are coming along at this point. The world is Fairy Tail and the author has taken his time to explore the world.

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I love this series, I love the effort you can feel to make it organic, almost as if it's still just Fairy Tail but gildarts had a kid. I usually can't stand reading because I place a huge importance on grammar and how the mc interacts with the world and other characters but this checks all the boxes

Great story! First had my doubts when I read the first draft quite some while ago, but then a couple of days ago saw the story again and saw that it was rewritten. The story is great so far. The MC is likeble and believeble in this world setting and I also like the side characters. Also the pacing of the story is good so I can't wait for more chapters!

amazing story so far, good job author and your editor lol------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------