webnovel
go_zpace
go_zpaceLv41yr
2023-04-17 13:27

good fariy tale story, keep up the work 👍

Fairy Tail: Annihilation King

noname_marco
4.8

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies1
aKiraInc
aKiraIncLv13

who is the love interest ?

1yr
Other Reviews
MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

I'm a 'proofreader' and have already read up to chapter 21, so I am capable of forming a decent review right now. First of all, this story is a rewrite of the author's other Fairy Tail story, and while those chapters have been deleted, I can confidently say that the rewrite is a lot better. The writing style is very good since the author has an editor, and if I were to notice a mistake, I would also mention it (along with a few others), which in my experience has only happened once. The author has some experience with his other books. The One Piece story was pretty popular and well-written too. The planning done by the author and the editor is very well done since they always talk in the chats and voice channels to discuss the planning of the story, and since this story is AU with a lot of changes, it has to be done very well so it feels natural, which it does. H*ll, the story is more realistic than the original in more than just the power of friendship being removed, but I can't say much of that since that would be a slight spoiler. The updating frequency should also be good since there are a few chapters stocked up, and their writing pace isn't slow, though the dropped (perhaps to be continued) stories do worry me even if they said they wouldn't drop. The world-building is very amazing since the AU elements are implemented very well. Fairy Tail's author left a lot of things unexplored, but in this story, a lot of those unexplored things will be shown. The MC is pretty nice. He looks like Shanks and has crush magic since he is the son of Gildarts (you can't tell me this is a spoiler. You gotta be a buffoon to not realize it). I don't think there is anything really bad about the story, so do read it

1yr

noname_marco
noname_marcoAuthor

shamless review but I hoped you guys liked the story. I know I dropped all my previous stories but I do plan to finish this story, currently, we have 23 chapters stockpiled, about 51k words, and tons of stuff planned. So yeah hope people like this rewrite

1yr
Donagha
DonaghaLv4

So is it dropped?😭😭 Could you explain why you deleted all the chapters and book cover

10mth
LordOzzy
LordOzzyLv5

I just wanted to say that I've been really impressed with the writing quality so far. I haven't noticed any mistakes, which is great. It seems like this story has a ton of potential, and I'm really excited to see where the author takes it.

1yr
TimEaterOfWorlds
TimEaterOfWorldsLv15

It has a lot of promise. Always great to see a fairytale fic and this one has a great premise. We haven’t seen much so far but the character design, magic and background seem promising. Author’s works have continuously improved as he’s been writing in previous books, so this seems good. Hope this lives up to it’s potential and that we get a lot of chapters and frequent updates.

1yr
Envious_
Envious_Lv2

The story is a massive improvement compared to the author's last stories. The writing quality has been quite good so far as there are close to no mistakes. It's too early to tell how the story development and character design are coming along at this point. The world is Fairy Tail and the author has taken his time to explore the world.

1yr
kovaksens
kovaksensLv1

Very cool work. And I just don't understand why she is still not in the top.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
MajorLove_Gravy
MajorLove_GravyLv4

I love this series, I love the effort you can feel to make it organic, almost as if it's still just Fairy Tail but gildarts had a kid. I usually can't stand reading because I place a huge importance on grammar and how the mc interacts with the world and other characters but this checks all the boxes

1yr
Nightsking
NightskingLv1

Great story! First had my doubts when I read the first draft quite some while ago, but then a couple of days ago saw the story again and saw that it was rewritten. The story is great so far. The MC is likeble and believeble in this world setting and I also like the side characters. Also the pacing of the story is good so I can't wait for more chapters!

1yr
AEE_R123
AEE_R123Lv1

amazing story so far, good job author and your editor lol------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
Related Stories

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

Azrail93 · Anime & Comics
4.6
798 Chs

Pokemon - A real story

There is a huge gap between the story of anime and the realistic story of Pokemon. This light novel closes that gap and gives the viewers a believable and exciting story with lots of adventure. Follow our protagonist Axel Blaze, a reincarnated person. With his knowledge of the previous Pokemon world, he hopes to dominate the world. But after he realizes how very wrong he was. This novel has a system, just to make things fun, the story is not focused on it though. "Success is like being pregnant, everyone says congratulations but nobody knows how many times you were fucked" So this novel tells the story of Axel blaze but all points of hidden difficulty he has to face to get it to there. -------- If you want to read advanced chapters earlier or just want to support me, you can do that at https://www.patreon.com/TheSilverPrince1 You can also visit my website and read 3 advanced chapters for free at: https://silver-prince.com/ (The story has a similar start as 'Pokemon - a mystical journey' so some people are probably confused. I wanted to say that only the beginning of the story is similar, not the later chapters and this story is not a copy.) Disclaimer: This is a fanfiction novel. So, the basics of the Pokemon world is not created by me. It belongs to "The Pokémon company".

TheSilverPrince · Anime & Comics
4.3
734 Chs

Life As Hikigaya Hachiman

In this captivating tale, a young boy wakes up to discover that he has become Hachiman Hikigaya, a character renowned for his cynical perspective on life at Soubu High School. Feeling taken aback by his new reality and the distinct lifeless expression that defines Hachiman, the boy makes a resolute decision to prove his value to those who have mocked him. With a strong determination to change their perceptions, he sets out to make them unknowingly admit, "See, that person looks like they've got their life together." Navigating his unfamiliar life as Hachiman, the transmigrated boy finds himself surrounded by a group of girls, each wielding various intimidating objects. When faced with their questioning, he experiences a rush of anxiety, realizing that he's confronting a complex situation for which he may not be fully prepared. The story blends elements of comedy, self-discovery, and managing relationships, as the boy-turned-Hachiman grapples with his new identity, unexpected challenges, and embarks on a journey towards personal growth. **************************************** "English isn't my native language, so please make it easy to understand and free of errors." You can check the link below if you wish to access advanced chapters: www.patrèon.com/Leonzky

Leonzky · Anime & Comics
4.4
529 Chs

Another Life In Naruto

In a world where the boundary between fantasy and reality shatters, Ethan Nakamura, an American martial artist and former coach, is reincarnated into the legendary ninja village of Konoha. Now living as Haruto Takeda, an orphan with no family, Nathan must navigate the challenges of the ninja academy and the dangers of the shinobi world, relying on his past life’s discipline and perseverance. As Haruto trains alongside future legends like Kakashi Hatake and Might Guy, he discovers a mysterious system that rewards him for his efforts. But the system offers no shortcuts—it only enhances what he has earned through hard work. With every challenge he faces, Haruto becomes stronger, smarter, and more determined to forge his own path. With the looming threat of the next Great Ninja War, Haruto must push his limits and learn to master both his abilities and his new life in Konoha. His journey is one of growth, loyalty, and survival as he strives to rise above his peers and unlock his true potential. Warning: This novel contains content created with the assistance of AI.

litrpgfanfic · Anime & Comics
4.1
327 Chs

Harry Potter : This Wizard Wants To Improve Too Much

Traveling through the world of Harry Potter, on the day he received his admission letter, Ethan awakened the achievement system, and as long as he did the corresponding events, he could get rewards. With three million gold Galleons, he achieved the achievement [Wealthy enough to rival a country]. Obtaining the blood of magical animals, he achieved the achievement [I am no longer a human being]. Killing a hundred wizards with Avada Kedavra, he achieved the achievement [Black Magic Lover]. … On graduation day, when Ethan took over as Minister of Magic seamlessly, the reporter of the Daily Prophet asked: “Mr. Adrian, as the youngest and most outstanding Minister of Magic in history, I heard that you have become famous in Hogwarts in one year of enrollment, won the Order of Merlin in two years, and directly defeated the professor in three years… I wonder what is the reason for your brilliant achievements?” Ethan spread his hands: “I just really want to improve!” ... This is a translation. Want to read more advanced chapters ? Check out my p**reon at - https://www.patreon.com/Bored_reader027 to read 45 advanced chapters for just 5$

Bored_reader027 · Anime & Comics
4.5
103 Chs

One Piece: Path to Power

Choices. Crossroads. Opportunities. Plunged into a broken world ruled by the strong, Damien must decide how his newfound life will proceed. Navigating through conflicts and alliances, his journey intertwines with the fates of powerful figures and kingdoms, challenging the very fabric of the hellish world. Set against the backdrop of the legendary One Piece universe, this tale reimagines familiar characters and lore, weaving a narrative that explores themes of power, redemption, and the indomitable spirit of adventure.  Damien's quest is not just for treasure or glory but a deeper pursuit of a truth that could change the course of history. As the tides of the Grand Line shift and churn, Damien confronts the harsh realities of the pirate world, facing challenges that test his limits and forge his legacy.  In this saga of the high seas, only the bold dare to dream, and only the strong survive. Will Damien rise to become a legend among pirates, or will the unforgiving waters claim yet another soul?  The journey to discover 'One Piece' is as perilous as it is wondrous, and for Damien, every choice and battle is a step closer to his ultimate destiny. Join him as he goes against all odds in the world of Pirates, Marines, and Revolutionaries, sailing on the Path to Power! ---------------------------------------------- Further fanfic information, QnAs and a trove of images are found here: https://discord.gg/aJHHHPvb6q Average Chapter Word Count: ~2600 words This story will be posted on RoyalRoad, ScribbleHub, Fanfiction.net, and AO3.

Paradox_ · Anime & Comics
4.8
169 Chs
Login