Review Detail of Sun_Dragon in The adventures of Sinbad (One Piece fic)
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You did very well in the description of the fight. However, the story has its flaws. 1 the protagonist has the body, not the soul of sinbad, he will not be given any spiritual attributes. 2 weather devil fruit if so, it would be a logia-type devil fruit that gives the user the ability to turn into a cloud man (雲人間, Kumo Ningen?). This fruit was consumed by Ana, a musician from the Freak Pirates. 3. To be the most similar to Sinbad, the best would be a fruit of the bible zoan of Quetzalcoatl. He is one of the most important gods in Mesoamerican culture, sometimes considered the main divinity of the Mexica pantheon. God of life, light, fertility, civilization and knowledge. Sometimes also lord of the winds and ruler of the West. It is also the Third Tezcatlipoca, associated with the color white. he can also fly, control ambient energy, and manipulate wind and air. In addition, he has the ability to manipulate environmental magical energies with a multitude of effects, as well as teleport under certain conditions. (the clouds that can be made in this case can be created with the fruit of the bible) 4. Sinbad is always direct and never lies. One thing to keep in mind is that if you lie, the lie becomes the truth. The story is going well, it's mostly advice, but I hope you read it and take it into account (use the translator for this, sorry for the confusion)
The adventures of Sinbad (One Piece fic)
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I’ve already read your comment, and didn’t reply because it would be a spoiler. The fruit you showed being a logia is false, it’s a fanmade fruit. I believe the weather to be a natural occurence, like earthquakes and not a an element so it would fit more in the paramecia tree like Whitebeards quake quake fruit. As for the god fruit, it’s a no. I have my own plans and your god fruit doesn’t fit my story. As for the Mc not being Sinbad, I specified in sypnosis that Mc gains the talents of Sinbad and some of Sinbad’s talent are due to his personality so he must acquire some of his personality. Ciao ✌️
dude where did you vanish we need more chapters and you didn't update for nearly a week please come back
PullUp:I’ve already read your comment, and didn’t reply because it would be a spoiler. The fruit you showed being a logia is false, it’s a fanmade fruit. I believe the weather to be a natural occurence, like earthquakes and not a an element so it would fit more in the paramecia tree like Whitebeards quake quake fruit. As for the god fruit, it’s a no. I have my own plans and your god fruit doesn’t fit my story. As for the Mc not being Sinbad, I specified in sypnosis that Mc gains the talents of Sinbad and some of Sinbad’s talent are due to his personality so he must acquire some of his personality. Ciao ✌️
PullUp:I’ve already read your comment, and didn’t reply because it would be a spoiler. The fruit you showed being a logia is false, it’s a fanmade fruit. I believe the weather to be a natural occurence, like earthquakes and not a an element so it would fit more in the paramecia tree like Whitebeards quake quake fruit. As for the god fruit, it’s a no. I have my own plans and your god fruit doesn’t fit my story. As for the Mc not being Sinbad, I specified in sypnosis that Mc gains the talents of Sinbad and some of Sinbad’s talent are due to his personality so he must acquire some of his personality. Ciao ✌️
PullUp:I’ve already read your comment, and didn’t reply because it would be a spoiler. The fruit you showed being a logia is false, it’s a fanmade fruit. I believe the weather to be a natural occurence, like earthquakes and not a an element so it would fit more in the paramecia tree like Whitebeards quake quake fruit. As for the god fruit, it’s a no. I have my own plans and your god fruit doesn’t fit my story. As for the Mc not being Sinbad, I specified in sypnosis that Mc gains the talents of Sinbad and some of Sinbad’s talent are due to his personality so he must acquire some of his personality. Ciao ✌️
PullUp:I’ve already read your comment, and didn’t reply because it would be a spoiler. The fruit you showed being a logia is false, it’s a fanmade fruit. I believe the weather to be a natural occurence, like earthquakes and not a an element so it would fit more in the paramecia tree like Whitebeards quake quake fruit. As for the god fruit, it’s a no. I have my own plans and your god fruit doesn’t fit my story. As for the Mc not being Sinbad, I specified in sypnosis that Mc gains the talents of Sinbad and some of Sinbad’s talent are due to his personality so he must acquire some of his personality. Ciao ✌️