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Review Detail of Rayyer in The Magitek System

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Rayyer
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they story a as uninspired as trash soup I like seriously bad shit happens just for the sake of it to be used as a plot point for shifty attempt to move and develop a story. I one chaper he's parents die, develop a crush on a girl to then time skip 12 she get raped and killed for what to make the story edgy to give the mc a goal.don't waste ur time her that was only the 1st it just gets worse the more u read and porn has better dialog then this

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