Review Detail of DirewolfCrusade in The Age of Heroes (ASOIAFxGOT TimeTravel)

The completely ordinary, utterly typical, wholly honest, and downright normal monotonous routine of an author giving themselves a 5. I’m confident in my plot and my grammar, aside from a few mistakes here and there…at least compared to… ;) I’ll try to avoid corny conversations. Point them out, and I’ll change them. I’ll do my best to publish consistently, but I’m a slow perfectionist who needs to learn to quit. I am writing this story in old English, like GRRM. The language might be a little medieval. This is not a story with an OP MC, it’s not a story that gives all the answers at once, and it’s not a bashing story. Inference and subtlety are what we’re practicing here. Deduce and come to your own conclusions. The enemies will be challenging, and Jon won’t be able to compare to his future self until the endgame, maybe, but his progress will be greater than normal…maybe… We’ll see. It is a mix of both Books and Tv-shows with a little bit of my own twist. Everything is basically canon—with a few creative liberties sprinkled in, of course—until the Long Night where my AU begins. This is my first ever time posting. I would love to hear feedback. Even if you log in with g**gle just to say you enjoyed it will give me a great amount of motivation. I want to hear about your favorite parts, what you didn’t like, what you’re excited about…etc. Constructive criticism is most welcome. I will work hard and continue to get better using your advice to do so. I hope all of you who stayed and read all of this join me as I start my journey. One I pray to be long. -Thank you all AWWOOOOOO