Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10.

Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. The plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.

4 chapters in at the moment and it looks to be an good read, nice quality of writing, mc looks like he's got all his braincells, world background is marvel cmon now, and it's a brilliant start to the story idk guys i think this might be a gem, looking forward to where this goes

It may not be a fanfic translated from Chinese, but it is obviously the Chinese writing style, including the clichés. It's not a bad fanfic, but those who can't stand these Chinese clichés anymore will probably hate the fanfic.

Shameless author 5 star review - No, This is not a translation, is my original work - Shameless author 5 star review - No, This is not a translation, is my original work -

you say its not a translation yet you used the description that all translations use.... its like you want your trying to scare off all thoughs that dont like translations lol

The first impression when I did see this is this a translation? Overall good. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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A unique take between the ‘Omniverse’ and MCU’s magic. There’s so much mystery behind MCU’s magic and its potential that I always kinda feel disappointed when fanfics use Kamar Taj only as a way to get the sling ring and exploit Portals. Look at Dr. Strange, if he wasn’t super reckless, Earth probably would’ve been close to undefeated unless cosmic threats starts to pop up. And every single evil version of Strange is freaking OP. Can’t wait until MC starts to interact with the avengers!