So far so good, but it's only 2 chapters, so not much to say. I would suggest to use ' ' for thoughts rather than **, it looks more readable.

A young but experienced solder held two things dear to his heart, his country and family. Spiraling into darkness as the former betrayed and hunts him down and the latter killed by the former. In the haze of his inner torment and guilt, he is given a chance to turn the page at an unknown price. Rekindled but now dishonored, he walks step by step through the abyss.

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I have yet to read this, but I am going to give 5 stars simply for the fact that it's a dishonored crossover(?). yeah that's it

Not sure how it was rated that high

As I continue to read this I find myself liking it more and more... This is both bad and great. I want to read more, but I will soon find myself unable to as I reach the latest chapter. After this happens I will have to scour through the endless amount of fanfics that are about collecting waifu and pointless plot progression with absurdly op main characters that one shot people and have anger issues. I will be sad. But once another chapter comes I will be happy. I'm sadly, and excitedly addicted [img=recommend]

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I really like the charakter and story design. I love dishonored and how it was implemented into the marvel world. I can only hope this story will conitinue. Great work👍

Aa sad beginning, and power source was also nicely design....i was bit confused as what skills were open and and what not that's all. Story is overall awesome....it's good if he find another goal in life.... people don't like sad ending hehe...

Thank you for this beautiful story. ....................................................... .......................................................