Review Detail of I_am_raven in Mystery of Jack

Hello, I'm the shamelessly self-promoted author. Before you begin reading, I'd want to remind you that this is my first time writing a novel and that English is not my first language. I apologize for any grammar mistakes, but I'm doing my best to write a good story. Please go easy on me.  That's all I have to say, THANK YOU, AND PLEASE ENJOY READING.