The intro made me say wtf 🤭 the story is actually fast-paced and easy to follow but the author should be a little more subtle with the information about the world. I find it difficult to do so in my novel but we can do this hahaha 😌
Surrealish
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LIKESurrealish:Thanks a lot. I do appreciate your honest opinion on that haha, but actually, that's just the basic, general info you need to start you off. It's essential too to give you proper imagery and understanding of the story. When you read deeper, you'll see more in-depth detail about the world, so nothing's yet given away. We have barely scratched the surface. Read on and you'll see😉image
Thanks a lot. I do appreciate your honest opinion on that haha, but actually, that's just the basic, general info you need to start you off. It's essential too to give you proper imagery and understanding of the story. When you read deeper, you'll see more in-depth detail about the world, so nothing's yet given away. We have barely scratched the surface. Read on and you'll see😉