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Wernel
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2024-03-22 12:28

Dear author, I adore your work with these main characters. Happy to read you punching all the clichés in the face. The character and world building are unique! It is written very nicely and interestingly, I don’t know English and I read with the help of a translator, but this does not diminish my pleasure from the process! More time and energy to continue, I'm looking forward to the new chapter! Fabulous!

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