I'm getting tired of this story. I'll explain how I feel about it. Let's take the last few chapters (First 20 chapters) : when I calculated the number of days in the week, unless I made a mistake I counted 8 days in a week. I found parts or paragraphs that were repeated as if copied and pasted into a chapter. I find it hard to understand what the author means, often as if the content has not been edited. There are numerous spelling errors. I made it to chapter 20, but the end of this chapter is incomprehensible. I want someone to explain to me : if it's Monday, why does Haruo say that the weekend is about to begin as if it were already Friday? I won't talk about how the characters of Rito and Kenichi are displayed in this story, they are slightly better treated than what I usually see in other fan-fics where they are vilified that it's annoying with the MC who is trash and a hypocrite. Now let's talk about what I liked about this story, I like the understanding between the MC and the original main characters (Rito and Kenichi), the MC's powers in particular the spiral energy.
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