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JRZTT1246
JRZTT1246Lv21yr
2023-11-17 22:09

Wow I read the review and feel very sad. People hate author just because he didn't choose to kill. like they can try again, true but can't they get punish like sent to jail or lost everything they have. That 1 way to punish them to make them unable to do it again. I for 1 against the killing, because killing didn't change chit. You just kill one group of people only to cause someone higher up to grudge again you and cycle keep continue over and over. Not to mention, they didn't really get punish for it. Many decided to kill themselves then be punish, it was a way to escape accountability. To punish someone they must know what/why they did wrong and suffer consequence for it, and that can only happen when they are alive. I won't argue against those who read story and didn't like MC for anything else though, they have their opinion and they give this a try and just don't like it. And while I agree that maybe calling character who kill other an anti-hero edgelord might be overexaggerate. But in this side where majority of MC is overly edgelorde overpower who has no care for the world aside from their harem, it might not be that overly exaggerate.

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Meta0202
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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

Welp, the story is so cringe for me and im sure the author is a 100% chuuni due to his writing style. The plot itself is also cliche and mc is typical Japanese protagonist

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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

MC kills his enemies? He is an anti-hero edgelord!

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asaade9999
asaade9999Lv3

1 star for having the MC of i am the fated villain cover while your own MC is a useless beta hero of justice type .................................................................

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EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv1

Right at the start too many systems, abilities, rewards, points, ranks, and shops. No introduction or explaining anything, just straight up exercise, and npc thought process. First person very boring. Everything is power of friendship, effort, references to random anime and manga. Anything mc does or says is love, kindness, friendship, family, or harem related. Mc wants to learn martial arts but can copy anything instantly, and has universal level spiral abilities. Gets several techniques every chapter. System function sucks. Wish fulfillment plot, lame interactions of useless characters, street fights, nothing enjoyable or interesting.

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ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsLv4

O never knew killing your enemies who want to kill you is Edgelord behaviour. Like tell me you are stupid without telling me you are stupid. XD.

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Takumoto
TakumotoLv3

{Warning: Mc does NOT kill his enemies. If you want Anti-hero edgelord then this will not be for you.} The thing is, the MC is intentionally holding back from killing enemies, which results in a reduction of his power and effectiveness. He will let people who target his family alive? then they will try again because the MC don't kill You said "his enemies" why not kill if the person is targeting his family, i can't understand is not like the mc will use talk no jutsu and make the enemie become a ally (google translater, my english sucks)

1yr
SimpleReaderPassin
SimpleReaderPassinLv4

if killing someone who wants to kill you or your family makes you an antihero edgelord, then every soldier that fought on the frontline to protect their family is an edgelord?

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Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

Overall the characters are extremely bland. I don't even feel like im reading a real persons thoights. Its all very robotic. Im half convinced this is an A.I. Story, the mc has bland motivations. Most of the characters are only ever talked about for a chapter or two then left alone for 10. Very pokemon gotta catch em all. A lot of the powers don't even fit the setting. A girl agrees to the harem then never seen again. over all had a decent start but it quickly goes downhill.

1yr
Drako0692
Drako0692Lv1

Well the note is out of kindness, the truth is I don't recommend this fanfic. That said, the system is nonsense and the protagonist's personality is not very charismatic, which makes him very flat. The classic justice motivation only works if the protagonist is charismatic or has a strong personality (since the emo hero is in fashion)

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